The Real World

Here's how my novella has progressed -- I've updated the first bit some, revised it several times, and it'll probably still change a bit as I move on. I just started the second 'chapter' -- though the 'first' one is supposed to be a 'prologue' of sorts, so I'll pull a Piro and call them Chapter Zero and Capter One. I warn you now -- it comes to be about 3.5 pages all told, but I'd really appreciate it if you read it, and even more so if you commented, particularly with constructive criticisms of what you liked and didn't like.

( Chapter Zero )

( Chapter One )

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Sitting around here at work with little to do, I've visited my Friendsfriends page and found a few people to Lurk off of -- I'd nearly forgotten how much I enjoy leaving odd "Random Passers-by Said" comments sprinkled through LiveJournal. I don't think I've done one of those in some time, since the last time I did a Search:Random.

Whee, and stuff.

Been working on my novella²-of-sorts. I think I may write up a dialogue between Johnson and Samson, as I need three (double-spaced) pages of dialogue for Thursday. It probably won't end up in my story, but I might decide to post it up here, maybe, or something.

Slow day today...