I find that altering your amount of dialouges can help this. have characters talk can 'show' stuff. Or it can 'tell' stuff. it all depends on what they say. Look at the slaughter hourse fiv by Kurt vonnegut (sp?). great book. didn't 'tell' the reader anything.
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I find that altering your amount of dialouges can help this. have characters talk can 'show' stuff. Or it can 'tell' stuff. it all depends on what they say. Look at the slaughter hourse fiv by Kurt vonnegut (sp?). great book. didn't 'tell' the reader anything.