http://otakulk.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] otakulk.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jackofallgeeks 2002-12-04 06:06 pm (UTC)

"I may tell too much and not show enough"

I find that altering your amount of dialouges can help this. have characters talk can 'show' stuff. Or it can 'tell' stuff. it all depends on what they say. Look at the slaughter hourse fiv by Kurt vonnegut (sp?). great book. didn't 'tell' the reader anything.

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